"Red Hot Ferrrai"

   By Choosing to drive a hot Red Ferrari you can image your self and Feel the kind of car you be driving know. Would it be a mere sports car or a red classy hot mama as this. This appealing eye Cather of a greet sports car puts many brand name American cars to shame. Xlo Matter what your age is we can find the light car to fit your style. All these  adds of different classes of Ferrari help reassure that Ferrari are one of the top market cars out their. Be a high class driver. Image your self behind a red hot mama Ferrari. Sitting on our finest quality leather seats pushing your foot against the paddle only to realize that the Ferrari sports car is where its at. 

                                                              

Revisions of my paper?

  I have struggled to produce an effective essay. For instance, looking at my draft, I need to revised half of my work. listening to my classmates, teacher, and friends criticism of my work has become valuable in sight the revision process become a little easier for me.
  
  when revising my paper I made changes to the content, and organized paragraphs differently. Rereading my draft several times, I found errors that I could identify. In paragraphs, I had problems writing the main idea to the topic of each paragraph. My focus on the main ideas in each paragraph was lost in my thoughts. I realized I needed to expand my thoughts, make my paragraphs shorter they were too lengthy I was losing readers attention. 
  
  I sat down to rethink my draft, I got a big picture in my mind. I was determined to complete this assignment in which the teacher wanted it to be completed.
  
  I organized my thoughts in paragraphs, focusing on the main idea in each. I tryed to complete a well structured sentence and clean the grimmer back to front in the sentences.
   
  I believe with a lot of work and critical thinking my writing can improve. I can make stronger essays and better paragraphs with rereading and breaking down each paragraph at a time, the weakest part of my essay was getting lost in thoughts.

Writing A "good," Effective paper

   What makes a "good"paper. To me, the difference between a  C paper and a A paper is good capitalization and punctuation when needed in writing, make sure your information is clear to your reader and arranged and  connected properly. Sentences must be  concise to grab your readers attention.

     I feel the hardest for myself, to focus on the  introductory paragraph. I  have found myself  over and over rewriting and thinking, I need to capture my readers attention. This part seems to be the most difficult for me. I always keep  in my  mind my thesis statement needs to be in boldface. 
     
     Having a "good" introduction paragraph holds your readers attention.  You must focus on the topic in each paragraph making sure it is concise to the point. Clearly making each paragraph connected as a whole in body in your paper.
     
     With practice and a lot of hard work this year,  I  will be able to achieve a " good" effective paper. 

Generating ideas,

    I believed I started generating a lot  of my ideas when I was young. Many  times sitting or playing in our back yard I dreamed about becoming a super hero like spider man. I  remember in my head of always loving to stretch different poses him many  going from different buildings or landing on roof tops. When  I stretch ideas in my head  I can  dream up stories about who that person I want them to become.
    I can relate to a lot of my stretching to generating my ideas for writing my papers. I have explored different worlds, seen people in different images of who I wanted them to be I feel you can generate  ideas in many forms. I believe you can work with comes natural to you and want helps you create ideas in your mind. 
                         Here is a example of a super  hero  that i stretch to wright a paper.

                                                             
                                                         
                                                             

why am I Taking English 101

  A major goal in my life is becoming a school teacher. I need to develop and build better skills in my writing. I would like to build my self-confidence in my ability to effectively write papers. I feel taking English 101 I will learn to use proper sentence  structures, and punctuations along with appropriate language  are major stages of writings process that I need  to develop. this course will be challenging for me, with studying and guidance I will learn and be able to demonstrate a proper for mat of writing a paper.