I’m lovin it, “McDonalds “

           Why are McDonald’s sales doing so well?  With the great advertisements, this company has came up with as a lot to do with it and how the company is willing to change to accommodate the need for tend in different areas of sales. Take the new advertisement of their coffee; you can still buy coffee for one dollar at McDonalds. McDonald Advertise about their new McCafe’ in every chain of their stores. They have upgrade a new café to sell various coffee choices, to compete with the new tend of coffee drinkers that are hitting Starbucks. McDonald advertisements are not just in their food restaurants but in the news, billboards, park benches, the radio, trying new methods to compete with the other fast food chains. 

         I found McDonalds, an interesting company to do my essay about for several reasons, first being, since I was a kid McDonalds has always been the greatest outing as a family we did on Saturday nights. I find McDonalds to be easy to write about due to the big advertisements and the popularity of the fast food chain. I did not choose any advertisements from the list due to McDonalds pop into to head and I wanted to write about something I love, McDonald’s restaurant. McDonalds has always show young and adults it is the largest fast food chain restaurants and always a great retreat to eat at, would it be their drive thru or sit down in their cozy style areas, you can always enjoy your meal, eating McDonalds.

Reflections of a Writer

I reflect back doing my first blog and I have realized I was not focusing on enough on the most critical part of getting a readers attention.

What is the blogs post title? When writing most of my blogs I feel I had some creativtiy running through my brain. When it was time to give my blog a title, a mental block stuck in my head.

As this year progresses I have found out that the title of your blog creates a vision of what or who it is that you are looking for or talking about.

I find that during our peer groups when we work on work sheets, the process becomes a bit overwhelming but I need to get a firmer grasp on the proper way to write blogs and papers,

With the constructive feed back of peers my growth in writing has become an easily task to achieve. At with the feed back of your peers I found many grammar errors or simple glitches I over looked. With the constructive feed back and criticism not only from peers, also from Ms. Spencer, to me it has this meant that some one was not just reading my work, but analyzing it with the perspective of being a writer. Over the months giving constructive criticism was important to me as well, when I first started I didn’t want to hurt anyone’s feelings, but now I realize this class helps us to consider our dialogue when writing, point of view structure and be very careful with our grammar.

To accomplish many of these goals in writing I have learned I need to become focused and find a quite place to let my mind flow with wisdom of creatively. I feel my writing can still be improved, but I have changed with in and become a stronger writer. I now feel great about writing, I like it.

Carson's

    I read Cynthia blog  the effect of this advertisement was right to point.I  feel instead of sperating gender, purpose and  Audience every sentence could be  blended into  a straight sentence. I feel she persuaded her audience a great deal to agree with her add. Cynthia took  a lot of time to do research and effectively send the message that she intended to her audience.    
    On my advertisement I feel that I had great communication with my  the persuasion  of  shopping  Carson's.   The area that  needs work,Is more  information of what Carson's has to offer the consumer. My purpose  was of course trying to sellthe  store I feel is the best place  to shop at and all  the deals are amazing. From my own personal experiences of  shopping at Carson's i havre found there are many name brands to choose form. The advertisement deals with all genders and its targets the audience interests. The image i am trying to effectively to get across is more consumers to shop at Carson's.   

"Red Hot Ferrrai"

   By Choosing to drive a hot Red Ferrari you can image your self and Feel the kind of car you be driving know. Would it be a mere sports car or a red classy hot mama as this. This appealing eye Cather of a greet sports car puts many brand name American cars to shame. Xlo Matter what your age is we can find the light car to fit your style. All these  adds of different classes of Ferrari help reassure that Ferrari are one of the top market cars out their. Be a high class driver. Image your self behind a red hot mama Ferrari. Sitting on our finest quality leather seats pushing your foot against the paddle only to realize that the Ferrari sports car is where its at. 

                                                              

Revisions of my paper?

  I have struggled to produce an effective essay. For instance, looking at my draft, I need to revised half of my work. listening to my classmates, teacher, and friends criticism of my work has become valuable in sight the revision process become a little easier for me.
  
  when revising my paper I made changes to the content, and organized paragraphs differently. Rereading my draft several times, I found errors that I could identify. In paragraphs, I had problems writing the main idea to the topic of each paragraph. My focus on the main ideas in each paragraph was lost in my thoughts. I realized I needed to expand my thoughts, make my paragraphs shorter they were too lengthy I was losing readers attention. 
  
  I sat down to rethink my draft, I got a big picture in my mind. I was determined to complete this assignment in which the teacher wanted it to be completed.
  
  I organized my thoughts in paragraphs, focusing on the main idea in each. I tryed to complete a well structured sentence and clean the grimmer back to front in the sentences.
   
  I believe with a lot of work and critical thinking my writing can improve. I can make stronger essays and better paragraphs with rereading and breaking down each paragraph at a time, the weakest part of my essay was getting lost in thoughts.

Writing A "good," Effective paper

   What makes a "good"paper. To me, the difference between a  C paper and a A paper is good capitalization and punctuation when needed in writing, make sure your information is clear to your reader and arranged and  connected properly. Sentences must be  concise to grab your readers attention.

     I feel the hardest for myself, to focus on the  introductory paragraph. I  have found myself  over and over rewriting and thinking, I need to capture my readers attention. This part seems to be the most difficult for me. I always keep  in my  mind my thesis statement needs to be in boldface. 
     
     Having a "good" introduction paragraph holds your readers attention.  You must focus on the topic in each paragraph making sure it is concise to the point. Clearly making each paragraph connected as a whole in body in your paper.
     
     With practice and a lot of hard work this year,  I  will be able to achieve a " good" effective paper. 

Generating ideas,

    I believed I started generating a lot  of my ideas when I was young. Many  times sitting or playing in our back yard I dreamed about becoming a super hero like spider man. I  remember in my head of always loving to stretch different poses him many  going from different buildings or landing on roof tops. When  I stretch ideas in my head  I can  dream up stories about who that person I want them to become.
    I can relate to a lot of my stretching to generating my ideas for writing my papers. I have explored different worlds, seen people in different images of who I wanted them to be I feel you can generate  ideas in many forms. I believe you can work with comes natural to you and want helps you create ideas in your mind. 
                         Here is a example of a super  hero  that i stretch to wright a paper.